Make the Impossible Look Real

In his book, Writing the Break Out Novel, Donald Maass states: “take that which is improbable and make it look possible: better still, make the impossible look real.”

As I’m currently working my way through the first draft of my third novel, I’ve come to realise that my story scope is too small. My main plot events are commonplace and my dramatic moments nothing out of the ordinary.

It’s not something I’m worried about at this stage. I shall forge on until I’ve a complete first draft, then set to work correcting the problem when I re-write. I’ll need to really think about those moments when my protagonist finds himself in danger, as they need to be both extreme and believable.

To help, I got out my highlighter pen and marked any sentences in Donald Maass’ book which I thought may help. I found this one particularly useful:

“What makes a breakout novel memorable are conflicts that are deep, credible, complex and universal enough so a great number of readers can relate.”

Deep

By deep, he means deep trouble. Think about the absolute worst situation your protagonist could find himself in, then crank it up a notch, or even two. There’s a reason James Bond ends up tied above a pool full of man-eating sharks.

Making the Impossible Possible Plotting in Fiction

Or why, in the Aliens film, Ripley finds herself walking through a whole nest of alien eggs, only to come face to face with their momma.

Credible

Extreme conflicts which appear out of nowhere won’t do the trick. The reason your protagonist has got into this terrible tangle has to be credible. Not just from a character motivation stand point, but also it has to be a credible situation within the story world. You wouldn’t find James Bond suddenly fighting with sharks if his archenemy wasn’t obsessed with them within the story parameters.

Complex

Problems which have a clear right and wrong solution are never so interesting as problems which have no straightforward answer. There’s nothing better for keeping reader attention than giving your protagonist a dilemma.

When Ripley faces the alien queen, her priority is to save a child. The queen’s priority is to save her eggs. They come to a compromise, the queen will let Ripley leave is she doesn’t harm any eggs. It’s not until the queen reneges on the deal that Ripley let’s rip, so to speak.

Universal

The idea of fighting aliens may not seem like something a lot of people can relate to, but in the film, Aliens, there is an additional maternal theme which gives the story greater depth than if it was simply about humans versus aliens. It’s a theme which repeats in the fourth Alien film, and I often wonder if that is why 2 and 4 are my favourites.

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8 thoughts on “Make the Impossible Look Real

  1. This article was helpful. Thank you for writing it. And the best of luck with your third novel.

  2. All excellent points, Lorrie. Whether the plot deals with an everyday situation or an alien mama, what makes for memorable writing is the author’s execution.

  3. Good tips. I enjoy reading stories where I can relate to the problems faced by the protagonist. Better than that is watching him/her deal with problems in a way that I can cheer from the sidelines.

  4. I love the way you summarized the way to up the ante in one’s writing.

    I try to make depth, complexity, credibility and universal appeal basic tenets of my writing in every one of my projects. Here’s hoping I manage to get it right. 😉

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